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Term 3 Writing Science Writing

The spinning white bright circle fell to the bottom of the deep dark bottle. Red bubbles came popping up they sank back down sadly again. Bubbles popping bubbles floating, bubbles are everywhere. EVA. age 7

// Last Monday made a lava lamp. // // It feels like I am drowning lava. // // I feel like a lava monster is coming to get me. // // I feel like they couldn't get me. // // I feel like they split up. // // I felt like I was going to pop like the bubbles. // // Zerlinde age 6 //

// 10.12.12 // // The big white circle went spinning down at the bottom of the bottle. // // Little red bubbles start to go up and down some stayed up and some went down yellow bubble start to go up. Bubble sticking at the bottom the water. // // Red bubbles sticking on the top of the red water. // // Bubble go away sadly suddenly. // // everywhere start to come back happily bubbles everywhere. // // Maia 7 //

The red smashed through everything bubble bursting up the bright circle spun all colours red yellow blue white boom it was like a rainbow it was like a expulsion it was like a real lava lamp more bright circle spun it was Awesome it was the best lava lamp more bubbles but big and big. Nenwaya 7

Lava LAMP. A CIRCLE TABLET DROPPED TO THE GROUND LIKE A THUD. `RED LAVA BUBBLING ABOUT TO EXPLODE. LAVA TRYING TO BURST ALL THE BUBBLES OUT. BOTTLE SHAKING AND EXPLODES ALL OF A SUDDEN..AND BUBBLES GOING TO THE TOP Tanisha 7

The lava fell in the lamp !

Big to little circles going in big couldn't fit so little went in.

With a little shake bubbles started popping Juhi

// A LAVA LAMP //

// We put Alkselsa in to the bottle then it started popping //

// Bye bye the water is like a fire truck and the oil is like a sun //

// I hope it is not going to burn my clothes //

// Joseph 7 //

Lava Lamp. The Lava Lamp was like lava Everywhere there yellow and red Yellow like the sun and red as a fire truck I hope it doesn’t burn me and bruise me. It was really hard to make I thought it was real lava but it was actually fake. It was like a lake. Ben age 7

A LAVA LAMP

//THE Lava lamp is yellow like the sun //

//THE red is like the colour of love I did not want to get //

//Burnt from the lava because it’s to hot but I do want //

//Some sun. // // Elissa 7 // We have been learning to write in the style of a biography: // Mary helps us with our work and she is very nice to us every day. // // Anton age 6 // // I chose Mary because she is mother of God and she is the Virgin Mary. // // What happend in her life What did she do is .Angel Gabriel came and said // // Hello your going to have a baby said the angel you will call him Jesus. // // Mary went to her cousin Elizabeth hugged Mary.Joseph wanted to marry Mary // // Soon Angel Gabriel went and whispered in Joseph's ear she said Mary is going to // // Have a baby called Jesus. Joseph married Mary then they went to Bethlehem // // Just then Jesus was born Mary wrapped Jesus so he cold be warm then // // Mary made Jesus sleep. // // Elissa age 7 //

Mary helps when people are sick and kids and God. Help the people when they be sick and God helps the people. Obsaan 7

//Mary is special because she is the mum of Jesus she had Jesus in her stomach. I like Mary because she is kind and her son Jesus is good. Mary is my friend I love Mary she loves me to. One time Mary lost Jesus in a church. Mary loved Jesus. //

Anthia 6

// I am writing about Mary. // // Why is Mary so imported? Because she is a true meaning to god and she is really kind and jeaneries. What happened in her life? Her body got taking up to haven. Who was in her family? Jesus, Joseph, and Mary. What she did? She had a baby and she wasn’t expecting it. Were did she live? In a temple in Bethlehem. // William age 6

Mary the mother of Jesus lived in Nazareth In her life it was wonderful she did good stuff and nice stuff. She did what she was told to do. Her family was Jesus and Josoph. Her cousin was Elizabeth. When Jesus dead she got rose up to heaven so she could be with Jesus. Mary did receive our prayer. She dead because everyone Kept talking about Jesus. The message she is saying is be caring loving and and respect people. Zerlinde 6

Mary the mother of Jesus is special because angels took her up to heaven. She lived in a old house. It was very old. Her husband Joseph was young. She to see her cousin Elisabeth. She was happy when she saw her inside her house. When she saw her inside her house she said ”it is very nice”. When Mary’s baby was born his name was called Jesus. When Jesus grew up he died on the cross Mary was sad that she got took up to heaven by the angels. By Saravuddh age 7 Olympic Games Newspaper Reports The New Zealand rowing team won three gold medal. They were so happy because they were in first place and they sprayed wine at each ether. Then the whole New Zealand team came. Four of them had bronze medals and the rest of them had gold. The people that won the gold medals are called Mahe Drysdale and Eric Murray and Hamish Bond. By Saravuddh age 7

The New Zealand Olympic rowing team.

Hamish Bond and Eric Murray won gold. They celebrated by drinking wine with their family. They sprayed water over each other. There team was getting better and better by practice. When Mahe Drysdale had his race in Beijing he had a tummy bug he felt sick and vomited after the rowing race. I was disappointed but in London he won a medal New Zealand won there medal in a hour

by Mario age 7

The kiwis carried the girls they spilt the wine at each other. The kiwis won the gold medal. Joseph age 7

At the Olympics the New Zealand team in London and their names were Mahe Drysdale, Hamish Bond, Eric Murray and they won gold medals <span style="font-family: 'Agency FB',sans-serif; font-size: 36pt;"> Anton age 6

//<span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 160%;">At the Olympics in London England this year the New Zealand rowing team, Mahe Drysdale, Hamish Bond and Eric Murry. Won three gold medals. They celebrated with their families. The coach said they were getting better and better. They lifted up girls that had bronze medals. I think it is special that they win gold medals because not many people get to win gold. //

//<span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 160%;">Caitlyn age 6 //

In Christchurch Radio building fell apart. There was ash like a volcano. There was a blast. There were people was laughing but the car did not get hit by the building.

Sapphire age 7 (Mrs Savage helped)

The Olympics at the start of the race it seemed like number two came first. But finally number one came first and won. And after it people talked and talked. And they stood on the boxes. And three medals came out. Chilli age 6

The New Zealand rowing team won the gold medals and the celebrate because they was excited and the New Zealand team picked up 2 girls bronze medal. When Mahe Drysdale he won gold medals too. And at the finishing Mahe Drysdale had tummy ache And New Zealand won 3 gold me**dals**.

Maria age 7

Later that day at the Olympics the kiwis won the gold medal or the bronze medal. In Beijing Mahe was sick who had a tummy bug and he vomited. He couldn’t go any faster. It was at the end of the they tried there best. I wonder how they where

Feeling? Maybe excellent or excited. Rowing team is better and better but he won

in London they worked as a team. Mahe got a gold medal for rowing.

Elissa age 7

<span style="font-family: 'Arial Black',sans-serif; font-size: 36pt;">The Olympics games tried there best. And they tried to win the Olympics games. She win the Olympics games tried they better. The rowing determined they better and work at a team.

<span style="font-family: 'Arial Black',sans-serif; font-size: 36pt;">Obsaan age 6

In London Mahe Drysdale rowing faster than ever. Across the line he goes 5 metres away and across the finish line he’s heading finishing the race there; his gold medal cheering smiling at him congratulating him on winning and the New Zealand team won. Tanisha age 7

Term 2 Writing

Last year I saw a lion and giraffe and animals at the zoo. It was fun, very, very fun and I saw a monkey and a zebra and I saw a big cat I saw more animals. I saw an elephant. AJ Dia age 7

Yesterday I went to the shops. I bought a dress and I bought a skirt. After that I went home and I played with my toys. I had fun. Anthia age 6

Swimming On swimming I was going to my swimming lessons then we will play in the pools. I did a hand stand in the water. And then we went back to school. Chilli age 6

Celeste came to my house

I am so excited because Celeste is coming to my house to see the dresses. When me and my mum baked scones Celeste tried the scones and she said yum. Jessica age 6

My Cousin I went to my cousin’s house and then my mum went home and I went home too. Then my cousin came to my mum’s house. Joseph age 6

Today I am going to my grandpas house because my mum has work at night time and she will pick me up in the morning. We go on the bus to school in the morning.

Kiera age 7

Autumn I see autumn colour juicy leaves. I feel windy magic trees. I hear swimming in the night. I taste colours from the juicy trees. I smell God in the air.

Maia age 7

My Mum

My mum’s favourite colour is yellow because of the sun is hot and some apple are yellow. Yellow is good she looks like a sun. She smells like ice-cream and my mum feels like a cake.

Maria age 6

My Brother I went to the swimming pool it was cool. I went with my brother we had fun. Obsaan age 6

I went to see my mum to see baby and to visit mum. I like my like sister. I love my little sister. She is cute Sapphire age 7

Love Blue is colour of love It smells like a lolly pops It sounds like sea My mum smells like raspberry. Shivnesh age 7

On Friday I went to fly my kite with my Dad. It was so windy that it broke. I went home and started to cry. Then the next day it was my birthday and then my Mum and Dad and little brother and Grandma and Granddad said happy birthday. I was so magnificent that I said hooray its my birthday today. The last thing my Mum and Dad and little brother brought me was a new kite. I used my manners to say thank you Mum, Dad and Ayush my brother.

Tanisha age 7

I am the Rain.

I am the rain. The rain is racing along. The rain is noisy. The rain is water bombing the houses. The rain is slippery. The rain is slapping me. I am the rain. Zerlinde

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